18.5 Million cosmetic plastic
surgery procedures performed in 2012. “94% of them were women”.
Beauty is desirable especially for females, and that is so logical
because the instinct that we created with prompts the lady to struggle to be
the most beautiful girl in her perspective. However, men have another desirable
factor, which
is the intelligence. Most men prefer to be more intelligent than to be handsome. In my
view, I prefer to be a smart because it helps me always to choose the right
choice, and it guides me to achieve what I want.
Life
can be defined by using the word “chances”. Life includes many chances. Most of
these chances are unrepeatable, so no one can catch these chances excluding a lucky
person or a smart one. Chance contains many ingredients. The most important
one of those is the time OR “to clarify” what is the best time to use this
chance. The best time rarely got by chance. Therefore, only the smart guy who
can capture the best moment to use this chance.
Women
can be fascinated by the intelligence of men. Every woman, of course, prefers
to have a clever husband or boyfriend. In deed, most of women do not care
whether their partners are beautiful or no, and they do not consider the beauty
as a fundamental factor to choose their eternal love. As a result, I can find my
love even if I have a deformed face! One more thing, money needs a bright mind
to get, so being an astute helps me to reap money, and it guides me to accomplish
my goals goal by goal.
“Life
is so beautiful, but when we understand it”[1]. We cannot understand life
without thinking about it cleverly. We have a prospect to do everything we want
if we use our minds in the right way, and we have a lot of chances that can
make our lives better if we exploit them.
[1]: Arabic proverb.
dear Saad,
ReplyDeletegreat essay !
what i did like in your essay was the hook and how did you demonstrate the two different concept of the beauty between the two genders. in deed there are good vocabularies that you have used in the essay.
however, i would recommend you to write more in the second paragraph to support the idea about the importance of the mind in the life to make the essay much better.
Hi Saad,
ReplyDeletegood job!
I realy like your way of thinking , your hook,and the Arabic proverb;).
However, I think you missed something in your essay becouse you did not follow the Topic:
Would you prefer to be very smart but ugly OR very dumb but beautiful? What do you think are the benefits / detriments of each scenario?
best wishes
Abdulrahman
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ReplyDeleteNice essay Saad I like it. your hock is very interesting, and you used advance vocabulary. I like your idea about chances and it is true. However, I disagree that women prefer a clever husband. Also, try to write more details in your next essay.
DeleteGood hook with the quotes and statistics. However, I'm curious as to whether women would agree with you when you say that they don't care if their partners are beautiful. While it is true than men might put a higher value on it, women consider it, too.
ReplyDeleteAlso, think about the fact that in animal species, it is the male who looks beautiful and colorful and decorates itself to find a mate; female animals are often plain looking. It is the opposite in humans. Why?